Yes, do keep at it. You will get there eventually. I say skip the hauling for the time being. Try to time your cast out first. Watch your fore and back casts and try to feel the rod load. Once you have that down, hauling will come more naturally.
IMHO...Good advice there Kyle. No need putting the cart before the horse.
Right now,if I go for more it collapses on me.Is it my timing,
The simple answer here is yes. It is your timing...Each rod has its own character and demands in terms of your casting stroke. Some are fast, some are slow. Some rods are buggy whips and others stiff as a board. You have to adapt your casting to each rod's individuality. Now when you add in weight forward vs say a double-taper, or if you are adding lines like sink tips etc...Well...This changes everything again and you have to find out what works best in each situation.
When your line collapses this can be caused by the caster trying to over power the cast...It sounds counter-intuitive, but by trying too hard you screw with the timing and dilute some of the power in the cast.
My advice...For what its worth...Take the 5wt and buy a cheap double taper for your practise sessions...Use an old fly or piece of yarn on the terminal end. Forget the 2wt for now...Get a simple casting book or take a lession at a shop and work on each step until you have it mastered.
You have to walk before you can run and now is the time to not pick up some bad habits. Take your time and put in the time and you will improve...Then when you pick up the two weight again you will think you bought a new rod. :)
Hauling has its place if you are fishing for Stripers off the east coast with Eric, or with Tony down off the Keys, but for most situations a simple single haul to speed up your line off the water is all you will need...
You might find a local club...There is always someone there that fancies themselves the casting pro (not always the case, but), maybe they can help by watching what you are doing and give you some pointers. My club has their meetings at a local middle school and we have access to their gym. We have "club rods" and anyone in the club can walk down to the gym and work on their casting. We even have a new members school once a year and folks new to the sport get personal attention from us gray beards.
A controlled, strong, straight cast...a few reach mends...ability to mend line on the water to extend your float, and abilty to roll cast...will catch you more trout now than being able to double haul and shoot a whole fly line. All in good time grasshopper! ;)
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